do you like my story???

as i roam the streets of the dark and desserted town, i come acrossed a man crouched in an alley. i ask him if hes alright, he lifts his head and says in a deep crackly voice, "Go away" and goes back to what hes doing. as i creep closer to the man he jolts up and laying on the ground beneth him was a small girl, the strange man glances at me, and back at the girl. almost as if he was comparing us. he looks back up at me with intensity in his black blood shot eyes and steps closer to me.