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How Much Do You Miss Me?

Dedicated to someone who goes by the name, Death

I wish to see your face,
But it's become the taboo territory.
Another wish is to plunged in your sweet & powerful embrace,
Though my heart is-without a trace-undone.
The dreams of my ambition & desire
Devises my love for you to burn with passion like a blazing fire.
I can't be without you
Because I'd die with no meaning.
Tell me, Death,
How much do you miss me?

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