Is this poem i just wrote good?

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i just wrote this and wondered wat ppl would think of it, plzz comment, here it iz:

Behind every dream is reality
Behind every hope is a doubt
Behind every love is heartbreak
Behind every hug is a stab in the back
Behind every light is darkness
Behind every today is the past
Behind every beginning is the end
Behind every smile are tears
Behind every scar is the pain
Behind every truth is a lie
Behind every rainbow is the rain

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    Waz my poem good?

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    Will u comment?

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