do you like me poem?(how much)

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I Want to hear Gunfire at me
I Want to feel the blade go through my Heart
I want to feel the posion slither down my Throat

I Want to hear the glass shatter as I fall from a far window
I Want to feel the blood spill from me as the blade is pulled out
I Want to feel the desperation of me wanting & needing Air

I Want to see where I lay dying
I Want to feel where I lay dying
I Want to stay awake as i lay there dying

I Can't hear you anymore
I Don't want to

  1. 1

    If you had to rate my poem,What would you rate it as?

  2. 2

    What part did you like best?

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  3. 3

    How does this make you feel?

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  4. 4

    How did you think i felt when i wrote this?

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  5. 5

    Am i a good poem writer?

  6. 6

    Will you comment this?

  7. 7

    Will you message me?

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