Judge the Poem I wrote. (Take this quiz I want to see what you say!) Be truthful!

Here is my poem, "Something so beautiful, Shouldn't feel it has to hide.
Never doubt yourself, or who you are inside. No one's happiness is more important than your own. Or who you really are, will be stuck in you all alone. The nervousness , the emptyness, Never will you be ashamed. You'll be truly yourself, Internally acclaimed.