what do you think about my poem 3/will you comment my poem

what do you think about my poem 3/will you comment my poem

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when the sun comes up, its always a beautiful day, and when it goes down, all of our troubles go away. we spend all of our lives, thinking about the bad things, but we never stop to think, what all the bad things brings. it brings hope, it brings sorrow, it makes you feel, like there will be a better tomorrow.

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    what do you think about my poem

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    should i write more

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    what else should i write about

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    will you comment me

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