My writing...do you like?

k. so this is a poem that I wrote about my mom dead in the hospital.

Heart Beat
You heart beat faintly
And now that beat is gone
Your hand is growing cold now
As it's placed inside of mine
As tears drip down my cheeks
And descend onto you
The tears swirl down your frozen arm
Your expression more blank than ever
I can't believe your gone now
And there's no beat inside of you

so ya. if it's good than please tell me in comments if you want me to put more of my work up! =)