what do you think about my poem 2

what do you think about my poem 2

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you cheated behind my back, and you lied and decieved, i hate myself right now, cuz you made me believe.i thought you was the one, but i guess i was wrong because i'm sitting here crying and writting this song.but don't worry baby, i won't make the same mistake, baby now i know when a love is fake. but i guess i should thank you with all my heart, because if it wasnt for you, i'd still be in the dark.so goodbye forever, cuz the chances of me coming back, are never.

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    what did you think about my poem? ( look at the intro)

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  2. 2

    should i keep writting more

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  3. 3

    what should my next topic be about

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