do u like my poem??
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The demons coming,
through the night.
I must prepare for,
A bloody fight.
My soul is burning,
no way out.
Empty thoughts of,
dread and doubt.
nothing to do,
nothing to say.
Still wondering where,
I went astray.
My heart is collapsing,
under it's weight.
In all the rubble,
are hurt, fear, and hate.
Then a deadening silence,
all is gone.
I realize now,
that everything's done......
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wow my comps being stupid... sry about however many invites i sent
It was good :)
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wow james. that was realllly good. nice job (:
eh its k i guess but i dnt wriite
needs work
the poem was good but it sounds to me you are crying out for help.........................
u have no idea
on a scale from 1-10. i'd have to give u a 10. (it wuz really good)
:)
wheeee it was goood! i write poetry too,wanna read it? go to mah page and see them! but i have about 20 i havent put on here!
on a scale of 1-10 id give you a 100. A plus baby! :P
i love poetry
whoa do u got a crush on my lil bro....no one calls my little brother baby lol jk ur fine...james it was a great poem love you..see you soon
mmm....k?