do you like my newest poem??  (squished, sorry)

do you like my newest poem?? (squished, sorry)

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It's about time to go,
but I just don't know,
I want to stay with you,
& I don't want to miss you,
death is a sad departure,
unfortunate to suffer,
so why us?
is life just till death or bust?
merciless on it's rampage,
tombstones with birth and death stage,
and I shall never forget,
your untimely departure always to love and miss.

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    will you comment plz??

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