What do u think of my poem. . . it's untitled so if u have any suggestions plz let me kno!!!

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She lied aganst the wall in the darknss of this cellar she ws nt to make a move or sound b/c he tld her he wud kill her she cried silenly & softly careful not to wimp all tht ran thru her mind was the pain left unkempt the wounds on her bdy she knew wur to heal but the emotional scars she knew were going to be hard to deal the pain like litening bolts,surgd thru her body & left her senstive & untrustworthy of nebody, it had all started out w/ a simple lil date but as the gears turnd insde her

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    okay the thingy wouldnt let me type n/e more so i have to finish it off in ths "question"

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    so whad did ya think??

    Please select all that apply.

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    r u gonna comment??? (plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!)

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