what do u think of this poem I wrote?

Fall

you may see me struggle
but u won't see me fall
regardless if i am weak or not
i'm going to stand tall
everyone says life is easy
but truely living it is not
times get hard
people struggle
and constantly get put on the spot
i'm going to have the biggest smile
even though i want to cry
i'm gonna fight to live
even though i'm destined to die
and even though it's hard
and i may struggle through it all
you see me struggle....
you will NEVER see me fall.