How do you like my short story?It's very sad!!T.T

How do you like my short story?It's very sad!!T.T

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"There once was a blonde boy,who was feared by the people of his village,because the boy was a demon,untill,one raven haired boy befriended the demon,as time passed,the raven and the demon grew closer,until the raven decided to leave his friend behind,this destroyed the demon,and the raven saw his mistake,and came back,But soon found out that the demon had commited suicide,so in return,the raven glided a kunai across his neck on the demon's grave,so he could meet his sweet demon again.Together"

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    How was it?

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    will you comment?

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    I worked my a$$ off on this!!!I'm tired now!!!*falls on the floor*

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    Do you know who I based this on?

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    Do you think I should do more stuff like this?

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