Short story 2!!!!!!!(Not finished!!)

"A young boy sits and stares as his mother falls before him,struck by the drunken hand of his father,as he sits and cries,for he knows his mother will never awaken again,the boy fails to notice his father slowly coming towards him,A few minutes later,the boy is on the bed screaming."No,Please father!!Stop!!I-it Hurts!!!"But the boy's father paid no attention to the screaming child beneath him...The boy continues to scream."(it's unfinished,but plz tell me what you think!!)