another poem plz help me!!

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I walked out the door not knowing that soon you would be no more Happy with what I had Not ever to know that in one simple moment life could turn out to be so sad. wishing while drowning in my misery that it was not to late to say the one thing i meant to say but its goodbye right now if you can hear me now three words meant for you I love you (ITS NOT DONE)

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    ok its not done so bare with me did you thinnk it was decent

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    Should I finsh it

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    have you read my other poem quiz

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