my new poem #1(comment)

my new poem #1(comment)

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I LOOK IN THE MIRROR...
i look in the morror, but what do i see? a lonely person, all broken inside; i look in the mirror,
but what do i see? someone who wants to be needed, someone who wants to be loved; i look in the mirror,
but what do i see? a broken heart, with tear filled eyes; i look in the mirror, but what do i see?
a poor little child, with cuts and bruises; i look in the mirror, but what do i see? something behind me,
all black and scary; i look in the mirror, but what do i see?

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