POEM # 10: You're My Reverie
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As fast as my heartbeat quickens
Time stops & stiffens
Everytym u walk by
I cant help but stare 4 a long while
As light as the gentle wind around
I feel so equipoised and profound
Whenevr our gazes meet,
It's lyk id willingly give up my life coz i kno im complete
As graceful as the water u are
But I cant seem to catch u or get to where u are
Now all i have are dreams of u
'Coz you're too perfect to be oh so true!
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Hey sis i think this is my fav poem of yours so far!!!!!! keep it up i love your poems 5 stars and in my favs
thanx sis! i heart that! ^_^
your welcome sis!
i think it's beautiful... :-)
It's a good poem, but I think if u would try a lil harder u could make even better poems. I also suggest that you read some poetry cuz it gives u ideas and helps u understans better what it's all about. My fav poets are Sylvia Plath, Poe and Shelley. Good luck!
cool i love poetry. i use poetry as a diary i let go of my feelings into a poem and it becomes something beautiful.
i loved it, it's great
that was AWESOME!
that was great! probably ur best! & i can totally relate to u in the poem!
tht was very sweet r u a girl or a boy?? tht was amazing and like everyone says it u should make more!!i totally agree on that!!!LOVE UR POEMS!!
that was fine if you wrote that t girl she would be all like ay mame
That was an awesome poem!
And for the last question everybody has different way of expressing how they feel. =)