what do u think of this poem I wrote? (this one is definately not as good as the others but i was bored so oh well)

does anyone understand


Sometimes it seems as if the world is ending
when no one really understands what your going through
not even when they say they do

they are so cought up in their own lives
that they don't see the damage
that is right before their eyes

as you tell your lies
and cover up the truth with your sleeve