what do u think of this poem I wrote?

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Take a Look

Take a look at me
and tell me what u see
do u see my forcefull smile
the smile that hides so many secrets
or do u see the tears in my eyes
the eyes that once took in too much pain

do u see my heart
the heart that holds hurt and shame inside
or do u see my skin
the skin that holds scars of pain

do u hide my secrets
do u see the pain
do u feel my hurt, my shame
or do u see my scars

so take a look....
and tell me what u see

  1. 1

    so, what did u think

  2. 2

    will you comment and tell me what u think?

  3. 3

    should i put more of my poems up here

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