ANother Night In The Life Of Me (New Poem)

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Tell me what you think please! (Continued through the first few questions)

Another Night in the Life of Me

I lie on my bed and stare at the ceiling
Hold tight to the blankets, cold and unfeeling
Echoes of your screams playing over in my head
Making me wonder if I'm better off dead

You open the door and hold me real tight
Whisper to me It'll all be alright
I want to believe all the things that you say
But I know they're all lies, so I push you away

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    I gaze in the mirror, can't stand what I see. It's a face full of joy, this cannot be me. A face I created, no more than a fake, I slam my fist to the mirror, for this pain I can't take...

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    Every scar on my wrist is a part of my life, When I thought the solution- the blade of a knife. Every line that you see, a part of my past, Where I'd glance away, begging the bleeding to last...

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    I clench my hands into fists, my knuckles turn white, I swear to myself that it won't end tonight. I've learned pain does sting, but love it does thrive, And for a split second, I'm feeling alive...

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    Ok, that above was the end. What did you think overall?

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    Should I post more of my work?

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