Walking On Glass(a poem by me)

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i wuld hav sacrificed my all 4 u
but ur luv was not sincere as mine is
my luv was rel was ur devotion tru
u cant charm me in2 bliss w/ a kiss
u rip my hart in 2 as sacrifice
u bring me down & cut deep in my soul
livin w/ u is not a paradise
u r shovin me in2 a blackhole
save me i m bleedin inside & out
i wont walk on glas 4 u anymor
u wil not hurt me no mor i now shout
there is nothin left of me i am tor
my pain & wisdom is now so very vast
but my luv is not so this cannot last

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