another poem-(finished in questions)

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into the darkness it calls me
i cant say no
slowly thought
it is comming for me
i cant resist
the shadow i see in the mist
mysterious,its drawing me in
the line ive drawn so thin
its braking
its making me give up
it says this is the end of all
waking up at night
i see the shadow in sight
its making me go crazy
wondering what it is
calling my name
now your the darkness i breathe
you put me at ease
lurking in the shadows
your here to get me

  1. 1

    its about time i say,im done with everything,im tired of being here,

  2. 2

    take me into the darkness...into the night,it feels just right...

  3. 3

    over all the poem was...

  4. 4

    will you comment on how to make it better?

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