My fiction story (Help me please?)

my story:
Meredith Hill just moved to Oklahoma from Florida her sophomore year and she has to get used to life there. She meets two people that go to her new school, Santa Fe High School, and they show her the ropes at school. But when Collin and Lucy don't turn out to be who Meredith thought they were, she has to team up with the group of people she thought would refuse to help her; the "emo" kids. Surprisingly, they've known about Collin and Lucy's true natures for a while.(cant fit anymore)