ok im writing a new story and i want to know if u ppl want ot read it and think i should post it on here

its called Behind the looking glass i was going home,home to forks,Washington this time alone and on my own for the first time i felt cold and empty what was i goign to do now wiht out my mothers warming smile and her child like laughter? i never knew what it felt to lose someone u love so much.Was this sarow? the only good thing was i still had my father and step mother. i could still remember those words befor the car crash echoing in my head the words of my mother befor her death