I wrote this in geography lesson what do you think of it ??

I wrote it in 10 minutes so it's not great :

I might wake up
But not sure if i will see
The stories crying
The sky won't stop bleeding at me
So frozen
The eyes of you
Are so scaring me
Lost in the same fire
But The birds
Can't see me
Will your tears be the rain to stop the fire
Will your fear be the bridge to my desire
Crawling to the darkness of light