"Untitled" Poem
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Do you like this poem I made:
Around, all around the storm clouds gather.
My dread grows as the the dark lord's touch falls against my naked soul.
It wounds me and darkly my life's blood drips with the pale swirling dust.
In pain, I beg forgiveness while my death's shadow looms over me.
Now alone my bunch of tears falls upon my darkened eyes.
This is my death.
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Do you like my poem?
wow that poem is amazing... even better than the "broken" one...
i wish i had the creativity to write a poem. (one that dosen't suck.)
You are extremely good you should publish a book or somthin' like that. I write poetry to but I am not very good at it so yeah... but you are good seriously.
cool poem you should get them published
in it i agree u good and they mean sumfin aswell {i think lol} yer and their like dark and stuff so yeh i like it even though i hate and never write poetry but urs is good
in it i agree u good and they mean sumfin aswell {i think lol} yer and their like dark and stuff so yeh i like it even though i hate and never write poetry but urs is good
thank you so much i was thinking on being a poet when i am older but that would not be my only job.
We liked this yea. Poems should be this dark.
that was gr8!
wow!
dat was soo cool......even better den d oder one...
Great Poem. Nice and Dark.