"The light is my weakness" poem

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This is a poem I wrote cos some people here in quibblo told me to make more so I did I hope you like it:

Around, all around
The lights have been following me
My light grows as my dark lord
Fades away with the pale shimmering dust

This wounds me cos this is my weakness
This weakness grows
This weakness grows
It never ends
My dark will never show again
This weakness grows
This weakness grows
What will come again?
Oh no! my weakness will indeed show again

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