is this poem good???? read intro for poem

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im lost and confused
dazed hurt and im through
but how is it that i still love you?

you've cheated made me cry
but i need you to get by

it maybe obbsession
but im sure im in love

your flirty smile and laugh
makes me want to hold you and laugh to
but i have to be through

you induce a poison
which makes me want you more and more

stop trying you have me
you have me in love

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    is it good

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    does it bother you that its free verse

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