i love to write stories. i will be an author. is this idea for a story good? be honest.

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here is what my story is about

an 8 year old girl named melody goes to an old antique shop with her mom. at the shop, a creepy old lady gives her a chrystal ball with a heart on top. she tells melody to wish for somthing then twist the heart 3 times. melody goes home and wishes 4 her own world. nothing happens. she twists it again and again. then her room goes pitch black and she falls through the floor. when she wakes up she is in a terrible world and has to figure out how to get out.

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    is this idea good? (read the intro, thats my story idea!)

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