Is this poem any good?

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Today i just wanna curl up and kiss the world goodbye
Today i want to look back and retrieve my heart
My eyes drain of all emotion
Let the emotion run down my cheeks
I keep trying to tell myself not to care
My body won't listen
I guess i'll silently watch you die
Watch my angel disappear
Maybe someday you'll realize i'm still here
Watching
Waiting for your hand to be there
So today i'll just attend my funeral
Today is the day my heart died.