"The neverfading sorrow" poem
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Embracing the one
The neverfading sorrow
Overcomes the nonpowerful airhead
Caring the one
The hiding slush
In a wonderland
Of the dayfade
Embracing the one
The neverfading grief
And no joy
Joyful drama
Destroying the one
The creatures of anguish agony
Of the day fade
The fading days!
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Did you like my poem? What should I write about for my next one?
i liked it but didnt understand it but that probs cos u av 2 look deep into it like all other poems lol .... in other words good job x ih and for ya next one write bout the ocean,sunset,sun rise , or someone being afraid to show who they are :P xx
i totally agree with her, someone afraid to be who they are is great! lol
I liked it, your words were deep and meaningfull, and yeah..
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that was great!!!!!! ummm maybe you should write about the stars,moon,nightime,summer,love, they arent the best but thats what i got right now!!!
write a short poem
If you don't understand the poem basically its about an airhead preppy girl and the darkness surrounds her and the days have shortened and became nighttime. This is one of the deepest poems I have created so far!
You should listen to Amaranth by Nightwish...it's alot like this poem :)
You are completely right! Amaranth is one of my fav songs and I got ideas from the chorus of that song.
i liked it. it was really deep. 5 starz & a place n my favez!
I didn't really like it, sorry!
Sounded kind of silly to me...Please don't take offense!
Try writing about something happier next time...?
stick to evil lol
it was ok.....i guess no offense