I Am Unloved - a poem by Sarah.
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I am unloved.
I am ignored and invisible.
I am drifting around, but nobody sees.
I am alone.
I am a lone tree, standing by myself.
I am a wall, always there, but taken for granted.
I am the extra chair that nobody needs.
I am insignificant.
There is no reason to be here.
There's nobody here for me, so why stay?
I am unloved.
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that doesn't like express how i'm feeling or anything.
(sighs in relief) Good, u scared me. I thought u were suicidal or something and then I would be sad. Good poem, u should definately keep writing.
beautiful opem, are you actully feeling that way? Because a lot of people love you!!It was deep , and m3rcy616 is right, the i am off of each line to improvise it to be better. Also your right. When you write or sing a song, when you write a book, when you write a poem, you express your feelings onto paper and out of your head, makeing your life better, why do you think people write sad poems and books, songs and comments, seriously!!!!
i give it a 7 and you should always keep doing what make you happy if writing diose that for ya
you know what would create a cool effect?
if you took the "I am" off of each line.
I love the writing.
I'm just offerring a cool writing effect.
aw thats really sad
but like a really great idea and well written :D
omg i feel the same way...
sad but good, keep writing and stay happy :) theres always someone there for u, even if they dont show it
Really good! Sometimes i feel that way!
10-10! I luv this poem
ummm. good poem... maybe you should talk to ur parents.... or a therapist....
this isn't how i feel!!
that was deep
u should definitely keep writing!