What do you think of this poem I used for English class?

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Raging desire fills my soul, heart in pieces, never whole.
Ripped apart by every dream, wretched nightmares make me scream.
I run away from every thought, But look at all the cracks I’ve got.*
I see the light, I’m getting near, And then suddenly, you appear.
I sniff the air, but it’s no longer musty, I look around, it’s also not dusty.
The scent is like a honey sweet mist,* It’s like my whole life has taken a twist.

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