What do youthink of my story? (It is not finished I need sugestions please.)

What do youthink of my story? (It is not finished I need sugestions please.)

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Here is my story, What do you think? (No bad commets please.)

Chapter 1- Meeting Wilson
It was Halloween on a Saturday and Samantha and Tim were walking down a dirt road in the middle of the night. As they were walking, Samantha spotted an old abandon house in the distance. Samantha pointed at the old abandon house and said
"Tim! Follow me!"
"Wait! Were are you going Samantha?!"
"To explore the house!"
"Wait!"
But, she was gone.

  1. 1

    What do you think of my story

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    Do you think I should write more stories?

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  3. 3

    If so what should I write about?

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    Random question- How are you feeling today?

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