Do you think this is a good first chapter. it goes into answers!

who went to Oakland almost 30 years ago is to blame for all the locker searchs now. BUt in truth he really had nothing to do with it.

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• Norbert could not go home with that grade. When the bell rang he left to his locker and then into the restroom to hide till the last person left.
• When he heard the very last person leave and lock the door he came out. Your school looks strange when no one is in it and when it is dark.
• you can feel like nothing can happen or u are dead at any second. You may be scared to move but you want to. This is how Norbert feels.
• But something happened that stped him dead in his tracks. A voice. On the intercom.
• " Get out. Get out" it said. Norbert ran for the door but it was locked. he ran to the bathroom to hide
• it was in there that he remembered that he took about 15 pills that morning. He did not want to die. he just wanted attenion.
• It must be so scary. Knowing you are going to die soon. Realizing you may not even have a minunite left.
• And then. Norbert was gone.
• It is weird how you can b so carefree one second and scared to death the next.
• A girl scaremed
• She found him.
• end of the first chapter.

did u like it so far?

• hellz yes!
• hellz no!
• duh!
• um... srry no

will u please comment????? PLEASE

• yes
• maybie. if i feel like it
• no
• i am not a member. i cant srry!
• i do not want to!

do u want me to put on my second chapter?

• no! (a bit rude dont we think?)
• yes!

srry but i willl not put on my second chapter. i am making it into a book (if i can) so u will have to buy it when and if it comes out!

• awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww (srry)
• YES!!!!!!!!!!! ( RUDE PERSON )