Tell me if it's good!!!

Everyone is watching. Although i don't know why. Slowly i come to a realization that they are staring at my arms. i follow their gazes, there are the cuts, bruises, and burns. John walks in and begins to beat me again and he becomes nine feet tall. He takes out a gun. "This'll shut you up." he says. before he saves my life i wake up in a cold sweat. I'm alive .Dang. Then my alarm screams at me and i rush myself to get ready and remember that one day i will be stronger then him, and i smile.