Okay hopefully your reading this because i just wanted to bring up a few things real quick.First is does this sound like twilight at all if so please tell me because i really dont want it to(no offense to the twilight writer and her books)but just want to know.Second if ya got any ideas then tell me because it could give me insperation on how to make the story better.Third i really do appreciate you taking my quizzes.okay im done now.enjoy