my poem (read intro)

i wrote a poem about a friend... he moved away... i talk to him via MySpace, but its not enough, ya know, so one day i was sitting listening to music, & these words started coming to me. I quicly got a pen & a notebook & wrote it all down. after some editing, this is what i got, its my first not contrited poem that im really proud of, but it doesnt have a title, so after you read it, comment w/ suggestions. pick #1 first, then read the sencond one.