A peom i wrote plz tell me if its good or not

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Feels like im seeing the world for the first time
dont know wat happened to me
i was once happy i was once full of hope
wish i could be that kid again
but now im stuck with my depressing life just imaging
wat i wish could happen
all i have now is my fantasy world
at least i know that world wont let me down

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    plz be honest wat did u think of my peom

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    will u comment

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