Another Poem; Honest Opinions Are Needed

Another Poem; Honest Opinions Are Needed

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Another poem! Honest Opinions Please!

Mistakes

Im sorry I hurt you,
didn't know what I was thinking.
Sorry I'm so stupid,
But I guess it's in my nature.
Thank you life,
For throwing that at me.
I realize what I did was very stupid.
I've realized what I've done now,
I'm sorry,
But to you,
Sorry is just a word.
Now I'm drowing in my sorrow,
Falling into an endless night.
I deserve it,
Sorry for the mistakes.

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