do you like my poem?

1 Response | Created by cantbetamed1928 |

save the tears
for the rest of your fears
you walk away
with the memory of today
you look back only to see a tear on my face
u turn away and ur memories u try to erase
we both knew it wasn't meant
we just never knew it would be like this
as you leave the abondness hits
i run to try to chase my other half
ur with that girl with her evil laugh
i sigh in defeat
and realize shes tooken my seat

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    do you like it?

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    could it have been better?

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    will you comment with ur opinions

  4. 4

    should i turn this into some sort of story

  5. 5

    also i wrote this just now did u know that?

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