Do you lik my poem?

Do you lik my poem?

1 Response | Created by iluvskittlez |

i want to know if my poem is good or not
see i want to be poet wen i get older so here is my poem:
Darkness hides
Darkness brings horror
Darkness is my enemy
Light comes out
Light brings comfort
Light is my enemy
I am not Light
Not Darkness
But balance
I bring and offer many things
I am not a hero
Nor a bad guy
Darkness is in me
But Light saves me
No self control
At which one i am
But balance is me

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    did you read the intro?

  2. 2

    was my poem good?

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