And Another Poem _

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THIS HAS NOT BEEN EDITED OR REVISED. hope u lke it =]

Reminder

The pain.
It never leaves.
Never lessens
Never stops.
Always a reminder
Of a past love.
A fake love
An unreal love.
Snip, cut, tear, rip.
My heart never stops bleeding.
Gushes blood
All day long
Just keeps going.
Keeps hurting
I keep crying
leave.
Leave
LEAVE
But it never listens.
Just keeps on bleeding
As a reminder
Of what could have been…

  1. 1

    Do you like the general poem? (like the idea and concept)

  2. 2

    do you like the acctual poem despite the fact i havent edited yet? (more of word choice and how i wrote it)

  3. 3

    do you like it more or less beause it hasnt been edited

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