my first poem. please tell me if you like it or not. don't leave any bad comments but tell me TRUTHFULLY if u like it or not. please comment!
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Created by XxxRockerxXxChickxxX
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Why?
Why do u break my heart?
Your right there, right next to me. I can hear you breathing.
Why?
Why do you deny me?
I know I shouldn't feel like this, but I need you so bad. I love you so much.
Why?
Why do I love u so d@m much?
I need you. Only you. I die everyday I see you and know. Know that I can't always be with you.
Please, just end this pain. Just cut my heart it half. Please.....
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