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theres a bird screeming in the tree..i can't hear it over the wonderment of your hair that day..
i breath every note of your voice into the lungs in my haert..that live on every word..
i dream of kissing you..but reframe as theres too much rain in the sky to tell that theres anything but you..
wet kisses.?.i was thinking..but theres another sweet blah balh from your la la la..i was tired but willing to let all my souls books be read by you..
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That was a great poem :) ~Sammy
I liked it :)
{part two}word by word i falling to you like a deep sleep..but more awake then ive ever been..
i wash i could sit in this coffe shop with you forever if i was to know if that would keep you from moveing..with gently sound of rain drops..and the distant rumbble of a city bus goes by..voicea and music around us and all i still hear is you..even if you don't say a word im listening to every movement of you hands and arms.and the lips move with no sound..
licking your lips..from the milky fluff off
{finishing part} music around us and all i still hear is you..even if you don't say a word im listening to every movement of you hands and arms.and the lips move with no sound..
licking your lips..from the milky fluff off the moca you orderd and the hands as they hold mine..and you try to guess the future in the palm..
memories..in the making.@}--%
that's so sweet!! i loved it!!
I luved ur poem!!
loveee it. (:
That was amazing!
I loved it lots!
Simply beautiful...
wow..........raw emotion like that captured simply in four stanzas.....(first part that is)....
~applauds~...great job...
i like it alot