what do you think(it's the beginning of a song I'm writing, and i had 2 edit so it wud fit)

Ther he goes/he taks my heart wit him
He dosnt know/dont wana liv without him
Just 2 see his face/each n evry day
Its blis n agony/all in the same way
Standin ther/hes jus so adictin
Wish he was min/but thats what Im always wishin
Hes always out of reach/or so it always seems
The only time hes mine/is in my dreams, in my mind

Hes my warior/my prince charmin
Hes my prom king/but only in my dreams
Hes my evrything/only he doesnt see
Hes my true love/if only he luvd me