I need you help, please read my story?

I sat on my windowsill with my legs swaying about in the cool night air. I managed a smile as I sar the glistening gold stars. Each one looked so magical and perfect, then as I glanced down I realised the reality. I didn't know who I was anymore, all I knew was that I didn't belong here and I had to get away. It was then I knew what I was going to do

I am thinking of writing a story and this is the intro I would love to write a story on quibblo but I need to know that people would read it