My newest Poem(is it any good? PLEASE COMMENT!!!READ INTRO!)

My newest Poem(is it any good? PLEASE COMMENT!!!READ INTRO!)

11 Responses | Created by samswirl |

Okay,heres my problem. I wrote this for my crush,but i don't know if its any good.SOOOO please comment and tell me what you think!

Jacob,I love you,although you can't tell,
Jacob,I'll wait for you forever.
Jacob,it doesn't matter what people think,
because I'll always be with you.
So Jacob,my Jacob,
wait for me,
because with you I want to forever be.

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    Is my poem any good?

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    Should I give it to Jacob?

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