Is my new poem good?READ INTRO!!!!PLEASE COMMENT!!!

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what do you think? .here it is.


brokenhearted all alone
thats when it hurts the most.
its hoping that he'll call,
its waiting by the phone all night,
its crying yourself to sleep.
its the simple things you used to do,
that kill you,that hurt you the most.