"Drained Inside" poem:

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Heres the poem (below) Please Comment :D

My drowsed up soul
Still be here for me, for me
My mind captured
All bruised inside, and all this time
I've been so hollowed
Afraid of you
I know you're still there
I've weeped inside
Drained inside
I can feel you storm me down
Fearing you
Surrounded by you
Blood leaking, I'm drained inside
I feel captured

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- Yes, some of the lines are similar to some song lyrics I heard
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Do you think I should continue writing poems?
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- I don't know and I don't care, it's up to you!
- No, like I said your poems are rubbish!

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